The samsqwaanch
One day there was Brandon Tyson and Mitch they had to go on a mission and find the dirty samsqwaanch. To find the samsqwaanch they had to go all the way to end of the world. So Sunday afternoon Brandon Tyson and Mitch packed all there stuff to go find the samsqwaanch they flew to Vancouver then they flew to Mexico and they looked for the samsqwaanch but there was no luck so they flew to Florida and no luck there so they decided to fly to Australia and they found samsqwaanch tracks so they kept fowling the tracks then Mitch walked over one of our traps and got his head chopped off Brandon and Tyson laughed for little bit but after they felt sad so they made camp and slept. In the morning they started searching for the samsqwaanch but no luck so they flew to Bangkok and they saw him in the distance so they started chasing him and then Tyson brought out his nifty gun and tried to shot the dirty samsqwaanch in the head but got him in the nuts and then the samsqwaanch saw Tyson with the gun and started chancing him and Tyson gets ripped to shreds Brandon laughs and take his tranquiliser gun and shoots him and then Brandon takes the dirty samsqwaanch and fly’s him back to Prince George Brandon gets millions of dollars and invites all his friends to go to Amsterdam and buys it
Wednesday, May 6, 2009
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Very Nice Story
ReplyDeleteI like The Refrence to Amsterdam
Id buy that if i had millions of dollars aswell
Check the puncuation Though
i am not good at spelling
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you put fowling not following lots of run ons but good over all
ReplyDeletei like the story of the samsquantch
ReplyDeletei also fancy amsterdam
thanks guys i justrandomly wrote in science class
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