“Girl? Where are you!” The call rang out through my small quarters, reaching me on my straw pile. Rubbing the hole near my nose, I flinched. The last time I heard that tone I had received a knife to the face, narrowly missing my eye.
“I am here!” I raced over, trying to please Madame Liken (Pronounced Lick-En, like yen without the y). She was the woman that trained all the slaves on how to care for their masters. Some would go to other places in the kingdom to learn, like being a culinary servant or to be an apprentice in herbs, but most stayed with the forbidding Liken. An older woman, she was well balanced, but had a hooked nose and pointy eyes used for sinister glares. All the slave girls agreed that she was cold and slippery and cruel, but we would never voice that. It wasn’t much, but she used so much violence against us it was the little we think and not be found out.
“Why aren’t you fetching supplies for your charge, that prisoner Felicity? She arrived minutes ago, you should have been there waiting!” She yelled at me, and smacked me out the door.
“I’m sorry!” I mumbled quietly, I had learned not to raise my voice to her. “I wasn’t notified, it will not happen again.”
The hand that had been hitting my back reached up and grasped the main body of my hair, ripping it upwards.
“I’m sorry your highness! You were not notified?” she said nasally, then threatened, “Since when did you become royalty? Just because you had a special treatment in your old land as a babe doesn’t mean you are better than any of these other filthy creatures. Next time you will be there before your charge is, or you will be the King’s next festival friend!”
Clenching my teeth, I stifled a gasp when she yanked my hair once more then shoved me onto the trail to the castle. Her threaten about the King did not scare me; I had heard it many times, but the comment on my treatment brought back horrible stories. Where I used to live, scarcely were there girls with ginger hair, and mostly because people had killed them. They used to believe it was a sign of a curse against the village and whoever lived there if a red-haired baby arrived.
I was told that when my mother first saw me, she hid me away from my father, telling him I was barely alive and could only see her. For many days she had thought about what she could do, almost going mad trying to figure something out. Finally, she gave up and looked to the village priest for help. Upon revealing me unto him, still only weeks old, the priest had fallen to the floor in shock. My mother wooed and crooned to him, begging for him to help her find a way to keep me. Finally, later that day, he had told her of their only option, a public purifying trial. My mother had asked for any other way, but he was stout in the option. In his mind there was no other way to treat me.
Days later, they priest gathered the occupants of the village outside its walls in a large clearing. My mother was forced to let the villagers see me, but after this I had only been told small bits. The people in my village, who later became my friends and family, were ashamed to tell me how they had reacted to seeing a supposed devil child. But the one thing I had been told, was that to purify me, they had taken a white-hot piece of iron and pressed it to the pads of each of my fingers for a second, burning my skin. This had left the tissue flat and smooth, but without any feeling. All my life I had been clumsy, though slowly I changed that by using my wrists and the outsides of my hands to feel objects. Right now I rubbed my wrist against each of my glossy fingertips, feeling once again that which had saved me, and yet still ruined me.
Running the last few steps to the servant door of the castle, I almost flew into the opening door.
“Harri! Liken is looking for you! Run quickly to your master!” My frantic friend told me, trying to brush her matted curls from her face without spilling the bucket of murky slush she was carrying. Sighing, she gave up when half the vessel sloshed on her already drenched clothes. Her curls bounced around her nose, seemingly giddy for freedom.
“I know, she already found me Pip, thank you though. Have to go!” I rushed past her, missing the worried look that passed over her features at the mention of being found. Soon that look vanished, but a frown replaced it when the rest of the bucket endowed its contents on her.
By the time she had turned around and was dumping the few drips that had avoided her out of the tightly thatched container, I had grabbed a pail from the washer room and filled it with water from a large basin, along with grabbing a cloth and towel from a cupboard on the far side of the room. After I found enough to wash the prisoner up, I headed to the servant’s kitchen. Folding my tunic up, I used it as a basket to hold a few pieces of stale bread and crumbling cheese, one of the best selections available. No fruits, and few vegetables were seen in this kitchen, alike spices and most meat. Those foods were sent to the Royal Kitchen, where it fed the King himself, his family, Advisors Leaders, Counts, and any Peers who stayed at the castle holdings got whatever was left.
I struggled down the back halls up to one of the slave entrances, and slipped out. As due, the sun was setting and slaves scurried in and out of the many doors leading out of the castle and to the slave housing. Past the main building I was at was the two story Holdings where all the prisoners were kept. It had been designed so that the prisoners who were supposed to be treated fairly were up on the top floor. As you went farther and farther down, torture increased and most of the inhabitants grew insane from being in their cells so long. There were rumors that the building went all the way down to Hell and that’s where the Pit was, and for many inhabitants it may have felt like that. Luckily, my prisoner was on the top floor, so I had already assumed she was going to be another one of the King’s playmates. Poor girl.
After I dodged across the yard and showed the Count my pass, I was escorted up the stairs by a young Peer. He had light, straight hair that he shook out of the way when he sneered at me.
“Why should we even bother following around scum like ‘er?” He asked the Count. “Its not like she could d’ damage to anybody, never mind break some un’ out of their cell.”
“Just go along and do your job.” The Count told him with disdain. Muttering curses about ‘bloody slave monkeys’, the boy pushed me in front of him down the hall. The bucket being full of water, it splashed out of its walls and down my legs. Dirty streaks appeared, showing how filthy I really was. I turned to glare at him but received a shove pushing my head down.
“Get’re moving snit, which one do y’got” He asked me, spitting by my toes.
“The new prisoner, I am to ready her for the King.”
Cause if she’s as ugly as you he would fall down dead at the sight of your face. That or he might recognize you as one of his own kind and welcome you into the family.
I bit my tongue and swallowed my response. Something he might not have expected, I would have surely been slapped if I have voiced what I had pondered.
Too bad I thought. It would almost be worth the slap to see the look on his face. But if Licken Chicken found I had caused a disturbance before seeing to my prisoner she would surely strap me…
I trudged up the stairs with the supplies, the Peer following behind. At the top we entered a hall of dark chambers, the lack of windows leaving only torches for light. We passed another sentry and went down three bends, ending up outside a large wooden door marked 28. The Peer unlocked the door and pushed me inside.
“She’s all yours,” he called back to me, already ambling back to the other guard.
I placed the pail of water on a small table near the prisoner’s bench, which was in the corner and was just a square wooden frame with a layer of straw. To my right was a table, but with no window for light I could not see the items. I reached for some rushes on the floor, and then went back to the hall to search for something to light them with. After they were in full flame, thanks to a nearby torch, I headed back into the room, and located another torch on the wall above the prisoner’s head. Going on tip-toe to reach the light, I wavered and fell back into the small table. The pail of water fell on the bench, and water splashed across the prisoner’s face.
I gasped, and hurriedly lit the torch, trying to see what I had down. Light slowly filled the room, and I could see the form of Miss Felicity come to life, rasping for breath. She was blotchy and fevered, and I feared her chest would explode if she breathed any faster.
“Felicity?” Woops, I thought to myself, that was Miss Felicity to me.
“Miss Felicity, hello Miss Felicity, I am Harriona, I will be taking care of you for now. Miss Felicity, are you all right?” I realized the heat I was feeling was radiating off her skin, so I fell to the floor and searched for the cloth that had been in the bucket. I soon found it and started washing her face, once again asking her if she was all right,
“Miss Felicity, do you hear me? Are you all right? Can you hear me? If you can, please open your eyes.” I whispered near her face, hoping she would so badly that it almost surprised me when her bloodshot eyes flickered open for a moment. Worried about their redness, I washed her lids again, hoping to soothe them. I looked up and realized that there was a large mound on her forehead, so decided to let the cloth lay there to help with the swelling.
“Mi-Miss Felicity. Can you see me?” I stammered. Was she blind? Oh what a horrible waste that would be, she really did have a fine face. Well past the bruises, cuts, and swelling those damned men gave her. Why we are put below them is my eternal question.
Those eyes opened again, and I looked down grimly. She appeared to be a monster, a beautiful, beaten monster. I almost expected chains to be tied to her wrists like a cage bear, captured and slaved.
Slowly taking a deep breath, I almost jumped when her breathing cut short and her eyes widened, focusing somewhere past my eye. I tried to console her, help with the pain, but I didn’t know what to do. I was just about to re-wet the cloth from the water still on the floor when she asked me, voice cracking.
“What is your name?”
Her head injury must be worse that what I had thought, I will just keep it from swelling too much and make sure she continues to talk. I told her my name again and repeated that I would be taking care of her for the King. Her eyes glazed over, still focused on me. I shivered but kept talking, trying to pull her out of the stupor.
“Harriona, please come close.” She interrupted, ordering me, voice quiet but growing eerily stronger. I wasn’t sure what to do, but obliged, trying to help her. When I stopped leaning in she snapped.
“No.” Then, “very close, please, place your ear so that I can tell you something.” She pleaded at me, eyes still trained perfectly, following with my every movement. It had started to scare me so I told her that I was there, and she could tell me. Meaning to make her calm, I gently grabbed her hand. All of a sudden she jerked back, making horrible sounds.
Oh no. “Miss Felicity? I’m sorry, did I hurt you Miss Felicity?” I didn’t move away, but searched her face frantically, trying to find anything stable in her features.
“Please, just do what I asked, I beg of you…” Her voice grew weak, and my will fell apart. I put my head beside hers and her breath tickled into my ear. Voice low and scratching, her disposition silenced me.
“I’m sorry, Harriona.”
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So, anybody have ideas on what her real name is??
ReplyDelete"Her curls bounced around her nose, seemingly giddy for freedom."
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"Soon that look vanished, but a frown replaced it when the rest of the bucket endowed its contents on her."
I laughed out loud when I read the last quote. XD
'Licken Chicken' is amazing too. I really like the nicknames.
This was a such cool look at the same scene from a different perspective. I LOVE multiple assessments! Ah, this was thoroughly enjoyable. :)
-STILL RENATA!
(Oh, yes... and I also replied to the older post...)
ReplyDeleteYAY RENATA- you make my writer's heart soar!!
ReplyDeleteYes, that (the second one) was my favourite quote from that section, it just got me eveyr tiem!
Ok, i wasn't sure about that, i had actually decided i was going to delete that part, but if the shoe fits....
Yhea, i thought it would be cool, and also we had to do a 'seperate' story from what we had been writing so it fit the bill!
Livia
I'm glad for that! XD It always makes me really happy when I see other kids who have a passion for writing. :)
ReplyDeleteI have a fondness for those nicknames.
-Renata (Who keeps forgetting to sign these things...)
omg thats your extra story whats your original? i didnt even read it i looked at how big it was and broke down and started to cry how do you have that much time you know we only have like 15 minutes in the lab
ReplyDeletebut you can type faster than me appereently
ReplyDeleteInrecaie- I typed it at home, and brought it in on a flashdrive. Trust me, that thing is my best friend!
ReplyDeleteRenata-I know, out of all my friends i am the only one that reads/writes a lot, and it was absoulute torture for them to try to read this, haha. They are 'supportive' but not THAT supposrtive!
ReplyDeleteAww... I know what you mean. I have a few friends who also write, though... who write QUITE prolifically, might I add. It's good to have someone around to read your work, but if I can't find an audience here, then I look to the online community.
ReplyDeleteAnd about the other post... AHAHA! I totally didn't get that joke. I thought she meant for you to come for a DAY... not FOREVER! Ahahaha... okay, so English 10 isn't forever, but you know what I mean...
Wow... on another note, my stomach is filled with carbonated water... :D
-Renataaaaa
Haha, i'm not allowed to go to chat sites, or join things. i laughed hard when my mom found out i had to do this, she's super protective.
ReplyDeleteIt might feel like it... jkjk
haha, i've got peach juice in mine, lol
Well, I don't think you can go wrong with a school district blog thing. I don't even think you're allowed to comment unless you have the right email address.
ReplyDeleteAww... TT_TT Ahaha, don't worry- maybe we'll do something else, hmm...
Hot chocolate today! It's raining! XD
I know, but there was some random person that commented, the teachers deleted it.
ReplyDeleteLol, SILENT BALL. A long-time favourite in my class.
lol, once again a mix of peach and fruit juice! Its overcast today...
Hmm... I didn't notice that! O_o That's kind of random, indeed...
ReplyDeleteSilent ball... ROFL!
Overcast, yup. Same here. Today, the drink of the hour is... iced tea.
yhea, she's on that stuff.
ReplyDeleteLol, its true! We have to be quiet, and its a game we all love.
lol, fruit punch. I love juice! not from a juice-box (ewwwww) but like in a can then made in a jug, yumm!
Oh yhea, it might be a while before i can write my next section, i have it in my mind, but i haven't been able to write lately....
ReplyDeleteAnd i have another story idea, but its messed up...
I know the feeling... I've also been on a hiatus of sorts lately. No worries, though!
ReplyDeleteI'm looking forward to seeing more. :D
Lasagna's on the menu tonight!
You are a great writer!
ReplyDeleteYou have a lot of great words:
-Wavering
-Purifying
-Pondered
I know, i have to break down and start writing an outline, then i can perfect it from there, lol.
ReplyDeleteLol, I don't know what is tonight...
Thanks Jane!
ReplyDeleteHaha, everybody comments on my vocab, like I told another girl, I love my thesaurus!
Question: I know there are a lot of Andersons, but do you know either an Emily Anderson or Sabre Anderson?
Outlines are great when you're stuck... They can give you a place to strive for. The same goes for notes; I write pages of notes and can't wait until I can put them in the story... :D So good luck with that! I hope you have fun.
ReplyDeleteI don't know this time, either... I'm in the last block of school for the day.
See, i have never wrote notes, but i store all the things in my memory, then every once in a wihle go over to make sure i still remember everything i have to write, it sort of works...
ReplyDeleteNo idea, but this is the first time i haven't had juice in weeks, lol!
Ah, well... my memory is like a leaky faucet; it pretty much drips away slowly. It takes me a long time to get around to writing whatever I need to write, too. >_<
ReplyDeleteCarbonated water...
Haha, i have figured out that by the time i get to writing my storty it will be about mid-sumer!
ReplyDeleteFizzy peach juice!
(i really do like fruit juice, well, just not orange)
Aaaah, well. :( Exams and the crunch at the end of the year...?
ReplyDeleteI'm still drinking carbonated water. XD I really enjoy it. Juice is good on occasion. :) Which reminds me... I need to take a carton of orange juice out of the freezer, ahahaha... And that's funny, 'cause orange is the only juice I will drink. If potato juice went all commercial, then I'd try it, for sure.
THIS IS OLIVS FRIEND BEN:
ReplyDeleteWHY R U DRINKIN CARBONATED WATER?WTF THAT STUFF IS NASTY IT IS LIKE MOLDY CAT BUT IF U PUT COOLAID IN IT ITS ORGASMIC BUT IT EXPLODES...
(Please ignore ben, i was proof-editing his story, and he took control of my comp)
ReplyDeleteexams suck...but i go overdrive...i havee nineteen study notes for a science exam....and she nmight not even let us use them...
ReplyDeletepersonally, i don't like tonic water, but i have heard it is good mixed with different things...
I hate orange juice...i will drink it occasionally, but idrank too much as a young child, now its gross...
I like carrot juice, and potato bread...hmmm
DONT U NEVER!
ReplyDeleteCUZ IM BO YO! and i did enjoy ur story especaily that part about things
ReplyDeleteyou mean Count Bastardo?
ReplyDeleteliar, jk
ReplyDeletefuzzy peach juice?
ReplyDeleteomg, didn't we discuss this before?
ReplyDeleteBen, you should change your name, lol, your gonna have all the grade tens either
ReplyDelete1. LMAO at you
or
2. Feeling sorry for you
Ahahaha... well, that was a view on carbonated water that I've NEVER heard before! I think tonic water is different from carbonated water... I had tonic water before, and I thought it was gross...
ReplyDeleteAH! That's a lot of notes for exams... When we were allowed to use 'cheat sheets', I always made my writing so small that I could fit about four lines into one normal line on a piece of paper...
Haha, our mistake then. We have this German couple who lives out by us, and one night when we were there for supper i asked for water. I had a shock when i gulped down a glass of tonic water, lol.
ReplyDeleteI did that for Socials earlier this year, but i only got 2 per line.....This time was nice 'cause we didn't have a limit on how many cards we could use!
I got principals, YAY!
XD My dad is from Switzerland and my mom's parents are German; I've been there a few times, and those Europeons just seem mad about carbonated water... Ahahaha, seriously- that's where I got addicted to it. But NOT tonic water... I also drank that accidentally while I was staying with my cousins.
ReplyDeleteGreat stuff! :D So now you're done this school year?
Awesome!!! I've always wanted to go to Australia and Germany. Through grades 10-12 i am taking german language, reason 1. For an extra course for UNBC, and 2. So hopefully i can go there one day and know what the hekc they are saying!
ReplyDeleteHaha, yhea, its got its own taste....
Yup, I've been painting for the ast week, then tomorrow (friday) I am going on a two week holiday with my BFF! I've never done that kind of thing before so i was so excited when she invited me!
Guess what????
Mrs. Moulder is keeping me on the Heather Park server, so when i get the rest of my story going, i can keep posting, lol, and next year i get to talk to her class!
:D Europe is amazing... I love it so much. I unfortunately wasn't taught Swiss German by my family... and they DON'T have German courses at PGSS! I'm so crushed... Instead, I continue on with French, ahaha... I hope to go on an immersion in Switzerland when I graduate. :)
ReplyDeleteYay for painting! XD Walls or pictures? I love using watercolors...
Wow, that sounds like fun! :) I'm hankering for a holiday, too. I hope you have an amazing time.
Oh, sweet! :D So you'll be keeping in touch in more ways than one. Glad to hear!
Just got back from my holiday, it was amazing! (super big road trip)
ReplyDeleteReally? I would think that it would, being a high school and all....
If KRSS gets rid of thier german before i get there i will NOT be impressed!
Neither, fences, lol. Oh well, I am making good money for it.
Turns out, i do like that stuff, my mom and I went shopping for the trip, and we thought we had grabbed gingerale, turns out it was flavoured sparkling water. Its actually not bad, and now i mix my juice w/tonic water for a bit of a bite!
Yhea, its gonna be awesome!
I have been thinking about my story now (the past week i have been really creative, its awesome, maybe this tonic stuff is good for me!) And i organized all my charies into groups on my i pod with short descriptions, and i have gotten new ideas, but first i want to go through and edit what i have first. I find it gets me into my writnig mood, so that will be helpful!
gotto go paint!
Ah, coool! Road trip... (Ahaha, started driving lessons, finally...)
ReplyDeleteNeither would I. It would be a great thing to know- German, I mean.
Oh, okay. Ahaha... That would be a good job, but I'm assuming this is outside... and it is SO hot right now... How are you coping with the weather?
:D Sometimes tastes change, I guess. Every once in a while, I try things I consider 'gross'.
Ahahaha! Great stuff! I've been in the mood for writing, too. I think my strange dreams and new experiences have been very inspirational. Oh, and Stephen King... AHAHA!